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Well guys here is page one. hopefully i'll have page two up by next Monday till then enjoy.

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Panel 3, the double "He... he" doesn't make any grammatical sense.

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well it suppose indicate a pause but i'll fix it with a one of these ,

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well yeah, I can see that if there is somebody talking about your main character, maybe knew him and is telling the story to a friend.

But, as narration and not dialogue, there is no reason for the double 'he'. i think

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actually it narrated by the main character...as kind of a reflection. you'll see in page two...

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